Here are 3 feedback forms about the front cover, content page and double page spread of my music magazine that I received from my peers. I showed them this because I wanted to get feedback to see how it would look to other people.
One improvement point that I received was that my models arm on the double page spread looks a bit unnatural. So I fixed it by removing the white image from his arm.
Another person made a point about the SPAG. I had spelt something wrong. This tells me that I need to proof read more. So I found the mistakes and corrected them.
I received a comment that my model is well “blinged up” which tells me that I used the right costumes which will portray the genre of my magazine well.
I received another improvement point about the article’s content. They said that it seems stretched. The same topic throughout. Need to make it more appealing. This means that I need to go back and perhaps say a bit more.